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artful_dodge

Ozymandius

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Sun, 20 Apr 2008 at 09:05pm

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My majesty knows no bounds My fall from grace knows no ground My pride will not don deaths shroud But now my name is no noun Call my name Call my name Legions march in my wake Levy spears for my sake Lo, this desert I did take Lay'd my foot made heavens shake Keep close to you What you hold dear Lest once again My name be feared Look on, tremble And know despair Ozymandius Once was here Call my name Call my name
Two others like this.
2008-04-20
The commendations this piece recieved in IF1 were: 0 minus votes, 2 plus votes, and 0 astars.
burning_sands
2008-04-21

this seems to have less flow than many of your other poems, though i do appreciate Ozymandias and such

macca
2008-04-21
The theme and idea is alarmingly similar to the sonnet Percy Bysche Shelly wrote Still, I can't knock the phrases and great use of language
kluny
2008-04-21

Obviously it is based on Shelley's poem. I like it, though, it's like a continuation of the same thought froma different perspective. I love the language too.

artful_dodge
2008-05-03
If Shelly wrote for Tool...
macca
2008-05-29
I know its based on Shelley's poems I was just saying..