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A Madd.Production

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Mon, 7 Apr 2008 at 04:19pm

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You say that you love me But how can that possibly be? You love [her] as well. It’s so .::easy::. to see. I promise and hold on Though I know that you’re gone. I -=linger=- and &dwell&, >Praying< I’m wrong… Your |voice| in my ear Makes me XwishX you were here. But I can (never) tell If you can /sense/ my fear… The +fear+ that you’ll leave, That you meant to &deceive&. And that I {fell} For it all, oh how ~naïve~… But the press of your hips And the taste of your lips Make me sing like a ;bell; As the cloth vvtearsvv and ^^rips^^… But alone in the dark With naught but my heart To keep company in this shadowy hell I =consider= your part… In this wicked production Of lies and seduction When only your lips, ..soft.. and -pale- Can silence my )(wail)( As I follow you into destruction…
One other likes this.
2008-04-07
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macca
2008-04-08
This is good poetry but my eyes went funny at all the font stuff You dont need it Its good without that! :)