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macca

Darling (I could be.)

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Sat, 29 Mar 2008 at 01:35pm

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As leaves would fall from hollow trees I wish that blue skies turned to grey Then calm breath from the violin Made seas hide passion from the bay If modest birds could never sing I wish that lips would taste of ink Time would stop and start again Then we’d have nothing left to think. And so the buds could never smile I wish the seeds knew of their dame Then water turned a shade of red That erstwhile put my thoughts to shame. As life falls through an hourglass I wish that all that’s fair was dull Then you could stand in front of me And you might find me beautiful.
Ten others like this.
2008-03-29
The commendations this piece recieved in IF1 were: 0 minus votes, 8 plus votes, and 0 astars.
bowers
2008-04-14
Gave me shivers :) just beautiful +1
galanteeshowman
2008-04-14

Wow.

Wow. For a seemingly simple standard rhyme scheme poem, this managed to moved me a great deal. Beautiful indeed. +1

emilyexstacy
2008-04-14
I agree. Very beautifuly written, Macca.
nikeshlong
2008-04-16
Awsonme, your poetry is really good, kep it up. Nice one
artful_dodge
2008-05-03
Memorable, simple yet biting.
burning_sands
2008-06-18
lovely. simply lovely. +1
bobman12
2008-06-20
mmmmmm, bummable.