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Fireblossom

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Tue, 18 Mar 2008 at 09:23pm

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Fire blossom. A perfect heat in the sky Umber hues crashing down Iridescent cascades of light Pattern the ground. Narwhal's falling Torn down and crushed Trampled in a tarmac stampede Over scenes, evergreen. Up high, the great Eagle Caught in a kaleidoscope Wings burning away with the clouds Eyes tearful with the pain. Burning, Scouring, Scorching The Ragnarök engine rumbles forwards The Armageddon clock ticks to high noon This time, the Apocalypse really is now Right Now... A sense of continuity lost Our sense of time inhibited All we live is just for I Eloquence does not become of slaves. Architects construct the end Thought-spun of mirrors and woven glass Poverty and suffering provide the mortar Smiling we offer our desires.
One other likes this.
2008-03-18
The commendations this piece recieved in IF1 were: 0 minus votes, 1 plus votes, and 0 astars.
kluny
2008-03-19
Niiiice I likey.
macca
2008-03-24
Whoa the choice of words in this is fantastic