Fireblossom
Tue, 18 Mar 2008 at 09:23pm
untitled
Fire blossom.
A perfect heat in the sky
Umber hues crashing down
Iridescent cascades of light
Pattern the ground.
Narwhal's falling
Torn down and crushed
Trampled in a tarmac stampede
Over scenes, evergreen.
Up high, the great Eagle
Caught in a kaleidoscope
Wings burning away with the clouds
Eyes tearful with the pain.
Burning, Scouring, Scorching
The Ragnarök engine rumbles forwards
The Armageddon clock ticks to high noon
This time, the Apocalypse really is now
Right Now...
A sense of continuity lost
Our sense of time inhibited
All we live is just for I
Eloquence does not become of slaves.
Architects construct the end
Thought-spun of mirrors and woven glass
Poverty and suffering provide the mortar
Smiling we offer our desires.
One other likes this.
- <<
- <
- >
- >>
2008-03-18
The commendations this piece recieved in IF1 were:
0 minus votes,
1 plus votes, and
0 astars.
kluny
2008-03-19
Niiiice I likey.
macca
2008-03-24
Whoa the choice of words in this is fantastic
