Here and there
Thu, 22 May 2008 at 07:11pm
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Here you are, and here I am. Where you walk; where I stand.
I'm a little bit lower than you.
I'm a little bit higher than you.
You're a little bit older than me.
You're a little bit of a child to me.
Here I cry, and here you sleep. When you lie right next to me.
I'm a bit more upset with you.
I'm a bit more fed-up with you.
You're a bit more tired than me.
You're a bit of a child to me.
There you stand when you lie. Here I'll be 'til we die.
I'm a little more patient than you.
I'm a little more decent than you.
You're a little more messy than me.
You're a little more decent than me.
Here I scream, and there you sit. Patiently waiting for me to quit.
I'm a little less strong than you.
I'm a little less brave than you.
You're a little less scared than me.
You're a little less of a child to me.
There we were, here it ends. Out the door holding hands.
I'm a bit more confused by you.
I'm a bit more intrigued by you.
You're a bit more unmoved by me.
You're a bit more loved by me.
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2008-05-22
The commendations this piece recieved in IF1 were:
0 minus votes,
2 plus votes, and
1 astars.
ronnoc-ekrub
2008-05-22
I love it!
macca
2008-05-22
Emily this is amazing.
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