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Thu, 21 Feb 2008 at 05:11am
In memory,
we throw rocks at furry woodland creatures
My mind makes me delirious.
I go about the day
in a state of
images
The air tastes softer.
Music sounds like silver.
and you don't seem so far off.
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i esp. like the last sentence. the line "My mind makes me delirious" seems strange to me but i like everything else.
The air tastes softer... great example of using the sound of the words to reflect their meaning. Nice, matty.