Breathe
Tue, 19 Feb 2008 at 11:38pm
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Inhaling oxygen to release..
again, and again
Inhaling to live,
to flourish..
taking in crisp air to keep moving,
to keep purpose
Taking it in..
to hope for a life
worth living
Respiration;
the lungs moving
in and out
Being fed by
the beating of
your heart
Breathe?
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2008-02-19
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2008-02-20
i like most of it. i think the third stanza doesn't quite fit, but i like its idea.
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