i n F l e u  (it's beta!)

LOG  IN  OR  SIGN  UP



Everything

1259
Wed, 13 Feb 2008 at 02:20am

untitled

You're my everything, my hope, my heart, my love I'd like to give you eveything; the world, the stars, perfection No boundaries but the sky, the sky doesn't have to be the limit; it can be the beginning of flying.. like the days, flying away before my eyes You're my universe, and I'm orbiting; I'm nothng without you, dear everything The beautiful beginning after ending; I'm at the starting line, and the finish line is not in sight.. thankyou, everything; I don't want this to end You're my star in a galaxy of nothing; you're all I see, my everything You bring this continued series of quickened heart beats; making me escape to this better place, a place only you and I can see, only for you and me Reality has no boundaries anymore, anything is possible; the world never looked so beautiful, until I gew accustomed to your eyes.. You're my sweet escape, my way to see the light; This is all with hopes of saying.. I love you, my star, my galaxy, my love, my Everything.
Two others like this.
2008-02-13
The commendations this piece recieved in IF1 were: 0 minus votes, 2 plus votes, and 0 astars.
bobman12
2008-02-19
Thats kinda harsh? Or am I just reading it that way?
aslidsiksoraksi
2008-02-15
o man just what we needed, another poem about coke.
macca
2008-03-23
Aslidsiksoraksi: Haha But I think this piece is sweet, and you're definitely a good writer!
imagination
2008-09-07

i think you have talent, but there are a few lines in there that contradict each other... i think. Or maybe thats just me?

anyway, i like it.

+1 from me

-Gee