Everything
Wed, 13 Feb 2008 at 02:20am
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You're my everything,
my hope, my heart, my love
I'd like to give you eveything;
the world, the stars, perfection
No boundaries but the sky,
the sky doesn't have to be the limit;
it can be the beginning of flying..
like the days,
flying away before my eyes
You're my universe,
and I'm orbiting;
I'm nothng without you,
dear everything
The beautiful beginning after ending;
I'm at the starting line,
and the finish line is not in sight..
thankyou, everything;
I don't want this to end
You're my star in a galaxy of nothing;
you're all I see,
my everything
You bring this continued series of quickened heart beats;
making me escape to this better place,
a place only you and I can see,
only for you and me
Reality has no boundaries anymore,
anything is possible;
the world never looked so beautiful,
until I gew accustomed to your eyes..
You're my sweet escape,
my way to see the light;
This is all with hopes of saying..
I love you,
my star,
my galaxy,
my love,
my Everything.
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i think you have talent, but there are a few lines in there that contradict each other... i think. Or maybe thats just me?
anyway, i like it.
+1 from me
-Gee