We'll See
Mon, 11 Feb 2008 at 09:33pm
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You have a tendency to break my heart
I took off full speed but the race didn't start.
Running in the wrong direction
While you stay behind
I reach out for your hand
But you don't grab mine.
The glass of the steeple is sweet but stained
I have suffered when nothing has changed.
Running in the wrong direction
While you stay behind
If I was less like me
Would you change your mind?
Time still has a tendency to move so slow
But sails away faster when you whisper "don't go."
Running in the wrong direction
While the grass still grows
Who will be the victor?
I'm sure no one knows.
There are holes in my heart where you used to be
The falling out came too easily.
Running in the wrong direction
But there are roads this way
Could this be another story?
Could be more heartbreak.
But we'll see.
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2008-02-11
The commendations this piece recieved in IF1 were:
0 minus votes,
3 plus votes, and
1 astars.
burning_sands
2008-02-12
sounds like a rap/chant/song. almost beat poetry. i like it.
+1 for rhythm
kluny
2008-02-12
yeah, beat poetry is what I was thinking too. A* from me.