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kluny

Constructive

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Mon, 4 Feb 2008 at 07:54pm

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Well, at least you got some constructive criticism out of it. Constructive...?! I'm an artist! I don't want criticism I bleed and suffer and die over every word I dip my pen into the inkwell of my soul When you criticize, you criticize my soul You attack my very essence Constructive? Go suck it If you flayed my skin off with barbed wire whips, it would be less painful. So what do you want? Have you been listening? I just want you to worship me. Is that so hard? If you want our praise, kid... You're just going to have to do better than that.
Four others like this.
2008-02-04
The commendations this piece recieved in IF1 were: 0 minus votes, 3 plus votes, and 1 astars.
kluny
2008-02-04

A bit overwrought, perhaps. Take it in any context you wish- it is not necessarily autobiographical.

burning_sands
2008-02-04

i've always been of the opinion that a little bit of pain is good for you... especially when it comes to the writing we all love to baby...

feel free to rip me apart... there's nothing that keeps me warm better than a blatant flame and winter's coming on.

kluny
2008-02-05
You do realize it's mostly tongue-in-cheek.
golden_orchids
2008-02-06
Kill em all...
bobman12
2008-02-09
I like this a little too much. A*
bobman12
2008-02-09
For the reason that this is my whole take on life.
razzle_bedazzlez
2008-03-13
yep. those bastards kill my inner child. +1
burning_sands
2008-06-18
oh yes, tongue in cheek and biting down hard. i'm agreeing with you there... ^^^
macca
2008-07-12
+1 this reminds me of my fashion sense (a work of art) which i find greatly unappreciated
kluny
2008-07-12
From what I've heard about your fashion sense, you should be i a museum.