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deadwatch_dummy

Failure to Operate

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Thu, 31 Jan 2008 at 01:55pm

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(System disrupted) See the notebook on your desk: Black ink staining scribbles that scream useless And an anxious pen clenched in straining fingers Turn the text into an itchy mass of symbols-- A failed attempt to burn the infection out of your chest And fight back the cancerous leech that repulses The black ooze that mingles in the puss and blood And sets its roots down in the cavity that held your heart; Feel it spread the ugly wings of despair across your skin Discard the darkness Discard the shell Brave crusader, see your limbs twitch with maddening excitement And slam your palms on the wood to curb it.
One other likes this.
2008-01-31
The commendations this piece recieved in IF1 were: 0 minus votes, 1 plus votes, and 0 astars.
kluny
2008-01-31

That's quite some imagery there.

A very new and foreign approach to a common situation: writing poetry to stay awake in a boring class. +1

And, claimed.

kluny
2008-01-31
Never mind the claim, somebody else probably got you.
bowers
2008-02-01
holy crap this is good +1