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kluny

Your Name Here

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Wed, 30 Jan 2008 at 03:28pm

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Let me write on your soul So we can all read you Everyone should know What goes on in your world Let me write the doors you kick open Let me compose the ocean that you walk upon Let me paint a picture of syncopation The beat that moves you, the earth you move I would burn my hands on your lamp I'd be blinded by the light I'd crush too close to the fire To find your ignition, to ignite you Let me write your name On every hand that waves Let me scrawl myself All over you
Thirteen others like this.
2008-01-30
The commendations this piece recieved in IF1 were: 0 minus votes, 9 plus votes, and 4 astars.
2008-01-31
this is a great poem. i especially love the third stanza. Yep, I deem this A* worthy.
kluny
2008-01-31
wreeey!
bowers
2008-02-01
made me feel all limp and weird ...in a goood way This is simply beautiful. Love the last stanza, "Let me scrawl myself all over you" just a gorgious sentence A* :)
golden_orchids
2008-02-02
THIS is well hot sorry I've not read b4 now :( yehyehyeh kluny gets herself ANOTHER A* for this metinks
phenylketonurics
2008-02-02

Aa, very nice. The last line is really great (made all the better by the lovely inflow preceding it). It has such a dignified urgency, though...I mean, at least I read it that way~

Awesome piece, though. Dig it much.

macca
2008-03-23
Talent!
macca
2008-03-25
I +1'd it by the way...
bobman12
2008-07-31
This is different, but nice. Very, nice.
imagination
2008-08-02
i really like this I'm not a big poetry fan, but this is something else good work! 1+