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emily

Abuse

1213
Sun, 13 Jan 2008 at 08:47am

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In the dark The rain falls No one larks But someone calls You look in each room And you look down the halls Your expecting great doom And some great pain You see your own tomb Your feeling insane Then there's a noise It sounds like someone's been slain You hear the same voice It's screaming to not abuse But you can't make the choice So in the end you will use.
One other likes this.
2008-01-13
The commendations this piece recieved in IF1 were: 1 minus votes, 1 plus votes, and 0 astars.
galanteeshowman
2008-01-14
Hmm. Dark. The last four lines seem to indicate drugs, or is that just me?
macca
2008-03-30

A lot of your lines have potential in them and i won't be a knob and say they aren't good, the only thing is that the rhymes can seem a little bit forced? Some good stuff but some of the words don't have to rhyme.