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Nudity

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Sat, 12 Jan 2008 at 08:09am

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Laying on the kitchen floor with nothing but my Virginity on. Watching the ceiling fan rotate as the smoke detector go off and smoke rise from the oven. Thats all I do. All I will do. My bare skin sticks to the tiles as I rise. Slowly I walk down the hall way, The only sound is my feet hitting the floor. A Smokey haze hangs in the air. I begin to choke and cough, My eyes and lungs burn as my head spins but I keep walking. Almost as in slow motion I crash to the floor. Laughing I say "Goodbye Hideous, Cruel, Vile, Disgusting World, Hello Hell."
Three others like this.
2008-01-12
The commendations this piece recieved in IF1 were: 0 minus votes, 3 plus votes, and 0 astars.
bowers
2008-01-12
fantasticly brutal. Absolutly love that first line. love this +1
2008-01-12
quite depressing. and violently brutal. good job.
burning_sands
2008-01-12
the first and last lines kinda make it, the rest are just... mneh
galanteeshowman
2008-01-13

Beautifully harsh. I like how every line builds up to the point, adds information. Might've been better if you had spun out the process some more, but still, +1.