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artful_dodge

Acid Casualty

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Sun, 6 Jan 2008 at 08:10pm

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In the absence of an absence Filling in my lacunae Sipping shots of absinthe Lazing in the shade All the visions love the dancing They listen to pan's flute play Time's a friend who's placid Helps my worries fade Now why would I leave this labrynthe I am safer lost this way Lost in drops of acid Make love with the rain
Four others like this.
2008-01-06
The commendations this piece recieved in IF1 were: 0 minus votes, 4 plus votes, and 0 astars.
poison
2008-01-06
Living with the green fairy. Sounds like a life for me. - Matt
poison
2008-01-10

I keep coming back to this and liking it even more each time. Why does this have neither the amount of votes nor comments it should have?

- Matt

aslidsiksoraksi
2008-01-15
nice work seems very quaint in some way though its subject matter obviously isn't.
burning_sands
2008-01-17

actually, the middle stanza loses it for me. it seems to have a different less bored/frustrated/lonely tone to it and it's incongruous (to me) when read with the others... *shrugs*

macca
2008-04-21
I don't like the word labryinthe that much I don't know why thats a bit weird actually But aside from that this piece I love it! +1
macca
2008-04-21
And I have just spelt labrynthe wrong...
artful_dodge
2008-05-03

This was supposed to be a poem about being a hippee bum in the summer, about relaxing and completely shirking your cares for the sake of escapism and chemically induced hallucinations.