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Sun, 6 Jan 2008 at 03:25pm

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Dude, Marc. That part of the wall is staring at me... That's nice, Matt. Marc? Yeah? It'd probably not be a good idea to have me as a conscience. I'd tell you to burn things.
Three others like this.
2008-01-06
The commendations this piece recieved in IF1 were: 0 minus votes, 3 plus votes, and 0 astars.
bowers
2008-01-06
XD I can actually imagine this as a real conversation it flows excerlently. Love your stuff :) +1
artful_dodge
2008-01-07
You're using these experimental forms to spite / me, aren't you.
poison
2008-01-07

Haha, maybe?

Nah, was just trying something. Probably won't have too many more like this. Don't really like how the linebreaks make it look. I couldn't get them right without messing up the whole poem.

- Matt

galanteeshowman
2008-01-08

The linebreaks didn't bother me at all... In fact I think it adds context: the time it takes the characters to form phrases becomes so very tangeable.

golden_orchids
2008-01-10
I dunno its ok, but I think it could be longer and shizz I guess I dont really get the whole minimalist thing u have going :-/
inthecafeteria
2008-03-10

I like this one. Reminds me of why I started liking your stuff. Has a brilliant sense of humor just slightly masking something else.

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