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scribbles for loss (haiku)

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Mon, 31 Dec 2007 at 01:13pm

untitled

i have sunk too deep you can save me-- you won't, but come back. i love you...
Two others like this.
2007-12-31
The commendations this piece recieved in IF1 were: 0 minus votes, 2 plus votes, and 0 astars.
galanteeshowman
2008-01-01

Exactly how haiku should be: this nicely conveys every feeling you wanted to get across in the right frame. Spot on. +1