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artful_dodge

Boy done fell out

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Sat, 29 Dec 2007 at 07:57pm

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See the prodigial son The family's chosen one I am the hero come Shining autumn dragon Dad left at eleven Mothers expectations Were never really let on And now my youth is gone I guess I feel okay But I whine anyway Please stop calling me gay Dear god why can't I get laid Youthful perverted little dreamer Try and make this whole wide world a better place Truthful, I can't keep my nose much cleaner Why does this whole wide world Kick dirt in my face I have a song to sing In my head I am king But there is just one thing My voice won't stop squeaking I have a gift with words I don't need to smoke herb But I never learned How love should be earned If I posess regret It's cause a girl I met If I loved that zealot I'd be a virgin yet Youthful perverted little dreamer Try and make this whole wide world a better place Truthful, I can't keep my nose much cleaner Why does this whole wide world Kick dirt in my face
Seven others like this.
2007-12-29
The commendations this piece recieved in IF1 were: 0 minus votes, 5 plus votes, and 2 astars.
poison
2007-12-30
I like this. ^__^ Especially: If I posess regret It's cause a girl I met If I loved that zealot I'd be a virgin yet Also, I like the shining autumn dragon. ^__^ A* - Matt
galanteeshowman
2007-12-30
"A virgin yet", that's pretty brilliant. +1
aetherlightning
2008-01-02
completely agree with poisons A* so i add my own...
burning_sands
2008-02-03

i guess this one slipped by me on the recent pieces thingy whenever it was posted cause i just saw it in the A* list and didn't know what it was and i thought i'd read all your pieces. :/

anyways, enough of my ineptitude. i liked it, especially the

Truthful, I can't keep my nose much cleaner

Why does this whole wide world

Kick dirt in my face

nice piece, getting +1d

artful_dodge
2008-05-03

I did this as sort of a joke on what'd be like if I wrote for Fall Out Boy.

I'm actually fairly derivative, just enough inspiration to make everyone love these little joke pieces.