Amnesia
Sat, 29 Dec 2007 at 08:55am
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Maybe if I fall asleep, my problems won't be here in the morning.
Maybe they'll just disappear.
Maybe they'll just go away.
Or maybe they'll find comfort in my bed and stay.
I should be happy that my questions finally have answers.
But they were heartless,
They were a steel knife,
They were somewhat a sneak peek to the dark side of life.
Should I have held my tongue as was expected?
Though I'm happy its out,
I didn't think twice,
So now my car's parked on a thin white sheet of ice.
But tonight as I start falling, I hope for amnesia in the morning.
To forget about people,
To forget about hearts,
Cleanup the footsteps behind me and...restart.
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2007-12-29
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artful_dodge
2007-12-30
Excellent work! Meets my standards for poetic expression and expenditure of skill.
Plus good.