Poison
Mon, 25 Feb 2008 at 03:39am
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You're the poison,
leaking through my veins;
pulsing, throbbing,
but painfully addicting
Your misery murders me
cutting through
my exterior;
Realization strikes me..
I'd rather die,
than dissapoint you;
To have poision slip
past parted lips..
to stop the lung's
craving of oxygen..
you could kill me,
you could kill me well..
The immune system
no longer able to fight off
such a fate..
You're poison,
addicting,
but possibly deadly;
Dangerous is love.
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2008-02-25
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macca
2008-03-31
This is brilliant
+1
bobman12
2008-05-05
The last line kinda reminds me of yoda saying somthing.