Burn the books
Thu, 13 Dec 2007 at 07:24pm
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Do you want to walk with me?
down paths
of white
and snow
with scented smoke
and cold air
and someday,
we can be a story
if you want
and I can save you
from dragons
in towers.
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2007-12-13
The commendations this piece recieved in IF1 were:
0 minus votes,
4 plus votes, and
1 astars.
burning_sands
2007-12-13
but see...
why are the dragons in towers?
everyone knows dragons are too fat to fit in towers....
cyanide
2007-12-13
Those last three lines just don't seem to fit. =\
Other than that, I like it.
burning_sands
2007-12-13
ok.
i can deal with baby dragons. and i do like what you did with the beginning...
poison
2007-12-14
He's saving her from dragons cause they're a story. :(
- Matt
bowers
2007-12-14
GOD DAMN IT MATT!!!!
bowers
2007-12-14
GOD DAMN IT MATT!!!!
bowers
2007-12-14
GOD DAMN IT MATT!!!!
bowers
2007-12-14
:)
anyway
A*
mikeec216
2007-12-14
I liked it; dragons in towers or no.
+1
golden_orchids
2007-12-23
I like it- up untill the towery dragonny bit XD
+1 u big gay