You Look Lovely
Wed, 5 Dec 2007 at 01:43pm
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That shirt did wonders for you.
All tucked in, and I mean all the way,
Not just partly tucked as if you were in a rush,
But neatly tucked, accentuating your narrow hips.
Your haircut looks rather nice.
I noticed, but you didn't notice I noticed.
Just a quick trim, not a new style,
Not a "new you,"
A quickie.
Do you take an art class?
Because I swear I see some glitter in your eyes.
A perfect pair,
Like a pair of flawless green Chuck Taylors.
Comfort, ease, but not of the crowd.
Your hands look calloused.
You've been playing, but not for a short time,
A long, extensive session, probably filled with
curse words and agitation.
The rest of them may find your callous ugly,
But I think you look lovely.
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2007-12-05
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2007-12-05
kind of...gentle.
+1
macca
2008-04-17
beautiful!
+1