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Tue, 4 Dec 2007 at 03:04pm

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sleep o slowly it came as we sat on rocks waiting for the ocean to tide

Rapid slow movements from the corner of my eye drank in the scene like tiny birds floating on water (that's what they were!)

oo la la ropes and chains and silver pains with golden blacks on razorbacks it's a mythical animal man, relax

With curved tails and bulging eyes bushbabies crawled the pillars of abandoned parking structures it was always dark there or at the very least shady enough to be dark enough from the lions

Those corridors the salamander sisters walked through so different all the time but after a while so boring, what a shame that even technicolour slime lost its appeal through the years of walking that they did. What were they looking for? It is postulated by many eminent scholars that not even Dorsatum knew as he wrote it all down. Of course the overt answer is: 'everything and nothing' but did they find it? Certainly. Those hallways were always

different always the same in their difference. How sad for the sisters it must have bin to lonely walk.

I was sitting on the rocks there at the edge of the sea and Will was there and he was saying something like "tyger tyger burning bright in the forests of the night and the stranger from weston ruined it all, oh no that doesn't work...

Three others like this.
2007-12-04
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2007-12-04
technicolour slime: a) amazing phrase b) color, with a U = awesome. +1
golden_orchids
2007-12-05
haha Good to see you posting again! As usual your work brings a smile 2 me face with its crazyness :D This one should be made a song ::) +1
inthecafeteria
2007-12-06

Gah, your wordplay is just so strange yet ingenious. It's like your toying with the language, making some strange game out of it. I love it.

I also dig the William Blake reference at the end. Classy.

plus one