Tendencies to Drift
Thu, 22 Nov 2007 at 12:16pm
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I think I'm a radio.
Would you like to dance?
I've gotten better:
Though sounds of presence bounce around the room
I've stopped running into people.
and I don't step on feet.
You look pretty
and I don't think its just the vodka speaking
I'm pretty sure you've always glowed.
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2007-11-22
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bowers
2007-11-22
I love it
this is exaclty what I was thinking of
you captured it perfectly
+1
burning_sands
2007-11-22
that is so...
i hate the word cute.
but it was.
spitey_the_userper
2007-11-28
That's so beautiful.
And funny...and sincere in a 'dancing around the subject' kind of way. :)+1
cyanide
2007-11-28
I like it. Ish.
I don't know.
It's good, but it sits funny with me for some reason.
golden_orchids
2007-12-23
Why are you sure I've always been pregnant?
I liked it up to that point :-/