popcorn
Mon, 19 Nov 2007 at 05:26pm
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Press your thumbs to my throat,
I would Breathe better than this.
Plunge a knife into my heart,
It would hurt less.
Hold my body down in the pavement,
So I don't have to hurt my own.
Submerge me into the deepest blackest waters you can find,
I would feel freer than.....
Just please rip my heart out,
It hurts so bad.
I'm screaming these words hoarse.
Like nothing I've ever felt before.
It's not physical.
I can't breath, I can't speak, I can't eat,
Broken into peaces
melted down
Cracked again
weak
alone.
I'm lost in this Forrest of the shards of my insides.
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2007-11-19
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noonewillknow
2007-11-21
This is what I feel like...
Nice job.
Plus one =]