Suicide Note
Sun, 18 Nov 2007 at 09:30am
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Do you truly believe that
There's nothing left to live for
I read the note you folded
Please don't go through that locked door
Without me, Without me
So don't forget
To tie a string
Because I will
Be following
I have lost
My rabbit hole
I miss my wonderland
I wanna go home!
You want to see that new earth
A world different from ours
But if you leave this planet
Can you please take me that far?
So don't forget
To tie a string
Because I will
Be following
I have lost
My rabbit hole
I miss Wonderland
I wanna go home
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2007-11-18
The commendations this piece recieved in IF1 were:
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2 plus votes, and
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burning_sands
2007-11-18
not = note?
razzle_bedazzlez
2007-11-20
sad and sweet at the same time. swad.
plus one.
artful_dodge
2007-11-20
Blast if I haven't been paying attention to my grammar!
Looks like I'll be going through that door after all.
macca
2008-05-17
You're a damn good writer.
+1