Maybe, Kinda, Sorta?
Thu, 15 Nov 2007 at 08:40pm
untitled
There are some things that can be repaired.
Perhaps not good as new,
but maybe just well enough.
And as I'm just sitting here
with orchestral clouds
I'd
like to tell you
You are beautiful.
but I don't want to drive you away.
You make me feel like a good person again.
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2007-11-15
The commendations this piece recieved in IF1 were:
0 minus votes,
10 plus votes, and
0 astars.
2007-11-15
Very true sometimes.
+1
radtastic
2007-11-15
+1
bowers
2007-11-16
Can't tell you how much I love your poetry.
+1
razzle_bedazzlez
2007-11-16
there should be more men like you in the world
+1
burning_sands
2007-11-16
yeah.
yeah.
+1
neoeno
2007-11-16
<3
+1
inthecafeteria
2007-11-16
You have earned your own little poetic niche in IF.
plus one
poison
2007-11-16
Kinda like your mom, ITC? :O! OHNSPA!
- Matt
radtastic
2007-11-16
"ohnspa"
Hahahaha.
artful_dodge
2007-11-18
It's short and sweet. Effective.
sold
2007-11-18
I just gave you the vote that put you over me. Damn you.
burning_sands
2007-11-20
oh ... that's painful
mikeec216
2008-02-04
I like and understand it.
macca
2008-03-29
Pretty!
bobman12
2008-08-01
Not bad.