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Always all the time

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Thu, 8 Nov 2007 at 03:01pm

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Heavy hearts bleed off the weight. Tonight is the feast of love. Scream now or for never hold your peace. Holding the necks of best friends. Cutting off all breathing. Hear the joyous sound, of Gargling and insufficient amounts of air. Reach your stomping hands above your breathing ears while your feet clap against the ground. Always never say ever. Rise above the king and high hail your envy for one another, Cause thats all we got that keeps us running. I'm planning something big for your little hopes to build upon, and crash down when it turns out to be a little less, than nine ninety five. Have fun dear souls. Have the best fucking time of your brothers lives.
2007-11-08
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burning_sands
2008-01-17

there's some word play in here i'm liking (Scream now or for never hold your peace) (Always never say ever)... there's also some strange wordings that do nothing for me... (of Gargling and insufficient amounts of air.)

(above your breathing ears).

i'm not sure if i like it or not. i'll get back to you perhaps.