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For Nick And Jacob

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Sat, 3 Nov 2007 at 09:34pm

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This is a story about a clique of friends Who were there for each other, from beginning to end. They were always convinced and just too cool to care About all the comments tossed at them, here and there. It all started when one fell in love, And hoped the other one felt the same Hoped and prayed till it actually happened And all that could escape the lover’s lips was the other one’s name. They had so many memories, all filled with love That both actually started believing that there were heavens up above Until all came crashing down one day And suddenly push came to shove He broke the other one’s heart, and it was all the other one could do To not take his life Because the ones who cared about him Told him not to He listened, but couldn’t stand it Couldn’t stand the way people would talk and face him The whispers and remarks he heard everywhere That would always break him And then she came along, not having a clue Always herself, always did what she wanted to do And he fell in love again And in that instant he asked her And when they clicked, her love was what he was after But after a while Tragedies broke in She felt that she couldn’t handle any of it And she broke his heart, again and again. And back to the one who broke his heart before she He found another girl, the girl of his dreams But the boy who loved him just couldn’t believe That he gave his heart for him Just for it to be ripped apart and deceived. But that’s just how life goes, Jacob… It’s obsessed with ruining us.
One other likes this.
2007-11-03
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bobman12
2007-11-04
CLAIMED! +'s.