As the tree
and the wind
cordially
lay against earthly states
of silence and mirth
and if I fall asleep
into your arms
please wake me
for I hate to miss
the sound
and bough
of you breathing.
the 'and bough' seems totaly random to me :P
the rest is nice :)
2007-11-03
i agree with bough being a strange choice, and not a use of the word you see often, but I think i like it. It makes sense in the context, and the fact that you have to sort of stop and think makes you think about the whole image and brings it all home in a way. A+ all round.
i agree with bough being a strange choice, and not a use of the word you see often, but I think i like it. It makes sense in the context, and the fact that you have to sort of stop and think makes you think about the whole image and brings it all home in a way. A+ all round.