Flowers
Fri, 2 Nov 2007 at 12:16pm
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you create something inside of me,
like in my heart, you placed a seed,
and everytime i hear you speak,
a flower blooms up wildly.
a little scared, i try to be still,
but the flower grows against my will
the feeling's growing all too soon
what was once a seed is now a bloom.
you're the flower's sweet sunshine,
so satisfied that now, you're mine.
forget the fear, just let it be,
and let the flowers bloom on me.
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I like this. Comparing love to flowers is in no way a new idea but I like your method of writing it conveys it well, in an enlivening sort of way. And I could definitely benefit from being cheered up.
- Matt