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poison

Glasses

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Sun, 28 Oct 2007 at 02:20pm

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That is how we're both going to look someday old fat and probably bald. and then we'll sit in coffee shops all day for the rest of our years. But we're not old yet so let's dance. and then at the end of our years we'll die. But I'll still dance with you when you're old.
Three others like this.
2007-10-28
The commendations this piece recieved in IF1 were: 0 minus votes, 3 plus votes, and 0 astars.
cyanide
2007-10-28
Aw, that's sweet. Especially that last line.
razzle_bedazzlez
2007-11-01
preetttyy:) lol sounds like something out of a movie.plusseeedd
aslidsiksoraksi
2007-11-01
i won't lie, i liked it, especially the random spaces and coffee shops
inthecafeteria
2007-11-02

I'll say, it's not my favorite of yours. But I do like it. If you had posted this before some of your better ones, I obviously wouldn't say that, and I'd say it's terrific, but the fact is that I've seen you write better.

BUT I WILL ALSO SAY that I do still like this piece, and that it actually delivers a good point that I have yet to see you cover until now. It's a nice feel-good piece, I think. It blatantly reminds you of what is to come, but then gently advises that you simply focus on the present, and take solace in knowing that things won't ever really change. It's very nice.

plus one

burning_sands
2007-11-17

i dunno... it's less awkward than some of your stuff that i like better... i equate awkward and cute in my mind sometimes.... it's nice nd all but .. .nnneh