Reaching Out
Tue, 16 Oct 2007 at 03:53pm
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You reach out to me
You won't let me go
You'll hold on tightly
Because you love me so...
A fluttering, fluttering
In my chest
Something racing, racing
Beneath my breast...
A warmth spreading
Through my gut
I fear I won't
Make the cut...
Sweating, shaking
Full of fear
Trembling, quaking
The time is near...
I feel like I'm drowning,
One step, two
And every one,
Brings me nearer you...
I reach out to you
I won't let go
I'll hold on tightly
Because I love you so...
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2007-10-16
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razzle_bedazzlez
2007-10-17
that was just plain pretty
galanteeshowman
2007-10-22
Simple yet effective: right from heart to heart.