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cyanide

Revolution: A Haiku

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Tue, 25 Sep 2007 at 08:12pm

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Here we are, waiting. Where is our revolution? All I want is change.
Four others like this.
2007-09-25
The commendations this piece recieved in IF1 were: 0 minus votes, 4 plus votes, and 0 astars.
bowers
2007-09-26
I agree +1
2007-09-26
mmm. Haiku. Very good. +1
inthecafeteria
2007-09-27

Anytime I think of revolution, I think of A Silver Mount Zion.

I'm finding more and more than haikus can be really neat. The trick is to make the few words you can fit in there really count. I think you've succeeded.

plus one