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this isn't funny

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Wed, 19 Sep 2007 at 12:42am

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Hey, where did you go?

Hello?

Is this some kind of game? I swear, if this is some kind of game, it's not funny.

You hear me? This is not funny!

Hello?

Hey, I... Hey, don't leave me here like this! I don't know the way back! Hey!

Come on! Where are you!? Quick fucking around! Where are you!?!

This... This isn't funny! It's not, I... I...

...

Look, I... I'm... I'm sorry, alright? I'm... sorry. I don't know why I did that. I don't... I don't. I just... I couldn't help it. I couldn't help it. It was late and I was really tired. I wasn't thinking straight. I didn't...

I didn't know it would upset you so much.

I didn't want to at first, but... but they told me... I didn't think it was gonna be such a big deal! It wasn't supposed to be such a big deal!!

But it was... It is. I know. You didn't deserve that. You trusted me. I... I didn't understand what that meant. I just...

They told me it wouldn't....

....

I don't know how to fix this. I don't know if I can fix this, but I want to try. I know what I did was wrong, but I want to fix it. I have to. You still probably won't forgive me, but I have to fix this, but please... Please, I need help...

Please...

Please come out. I want to try to make things right, but I need help.

Where are you...?

This...

this isn't funny...

Two others like this.
2007-09-19
The commendations this piece recieved in IF1 were: 0 minus votes, 2 plus votes, and 0 astars.
inthecafeteria
2007-09-19
I promise, that is the most "..."s I will ever put in one piece.
themilkman
2007-09-19
I don't really know how I feel about this piece. I know I don't like it, but I don't dislike it. +0
aetherlightning
2007-09-19
Stealing my ellipsis abuse eh? poseur!
cyanide
2007-09-19

It makes me curious. I like that. Like I said to you in IRC, it feels like a frantic voicemail, or several. And I don't mind the ellipsis abuse, because it makes it feel more real, like where someone speaking would actually pause.

Plus one.

burning_sands
2008-02-15

i think anyone who has ever spent time online goes through a period of ellipsis abuse... i like writing these kinds of pieces only i normally write the other side too. that's probably cause i talk to myself a lot though.