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The Death of Me

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Thu, 6 Sep 2007 at 08:20am

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He suffers in deaf, dumb, blind and limp silence as, with blistered and bloodied feet, he climbs the crumbing path. His memory teased with the idea of milk and honey, sunshine and rain, warm clothed and a feathered pillow. These days seem like a dream, an ideal that was once real but is now shrouded in shadow and distorted in discontent.

He stumbles again on the glass that tears at his feet and turn his palms to ribbons of crimson as he clings to the rock face, the cold hard wind like needles on his naked flesh.

Others walk his path. But none seem to care. They stride proudly with confidence and leather bound shoes. They take no pity on the cripple and do not offer him their coat or a sip of their water; instead he receives a thrashing and a bitter swig from a hip flask that causes him to stumble further.

But still he crawls up the mountain face, painfully making his way up the path of enrichment, hoping that by some miracle there will be, one day, relief, warmth, comfort, leather bound shoes and a crust of bread.

Education will be the death of me.

Three others like this.
2007-09-06
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galanteeshowman
2007-09-06

There's this sentence in the back of my head since forever, that goes "life will be the death of me". But yeah, that's education how I remember it, nicely dramatized.

kluny
2007-09-06
School is where A students teach B students to work fo C students. Fuck em all.
inthecafeteria
2007-10-01
Hot damn. Very nice. Written and delivered expertly. Wonderful and clever. School is slowly eating away at whatever enjoyment I try to stock up on during my weekend... :/ plus one
firefly_catcher
2008-02-20
Perfectly executed, I love your writing style ^^ +1
burning_sands
2008-03-01
this makes me so unhappy sometimes. "now children, don't let your schooling get in the way of your education..."