DLZ
Tue, 4 Sep 2007 at 06:53pm
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You're walking across the field,
You look both ways then yield.
You're looking straight at me,
And I'm the only one you see;
There are people all around,
But you hear no other sound,
Only your heart beating fast,
Why can't this moment last.
Your standing right there,
All you do is stare,
You don't say one word,
Bells and whistles are all you heard.
The fireworks go off and you come near,
Then you whisper in my ear;
I love you and I always will,
Until the day you die. Until!
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2007-09-04
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