Mr. Right
Tue, 4 Sep 2007 at 06:44pm
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I look at him,
The lights dim,
He looks at me,
And I don't see.
I heard many things,
But what truth do they bring,
Is it fact or fake,
Or is this all it takes.
Are you Mr.Right,
Or is it just the light;
You look perfect to me,
For all I can see.
What hides behind those eyes,
The truth or many lies,
Will I ever know,
How far does the rabbit hole go!
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2007-09-04
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themilkman
2007-09-04
Emily, love, you're back!
themilkman
2007-09-04
Claimed, also.
kluny
2007-09-04
Don't try so hard to rhyme. Also, welcome back.
themilkman
2007-09-05
kluny, you're so lame.
sold
2007-10-05
milkman you're so calcium.