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Fantasy World

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Sun, 2 Sep 2007 at 05:57am

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There is no crime, no death, no illness, no pain. The old live on for ever and the young grow old. Happiness flourishes in the heart of every man, animal and plant. Flowers serenade the streets with music. No-one goes hungry, or without clean water. There is exactly 12 hours of light and 12 hours of dark every day of the year. When the snow falls everyone is kept warm, and children play in the snow. When the leaves fall, the soft crunch keeps everyone smiling. When the flowers grow, their music once again permeates the lives of children and adults united. No-one is above anyone else. No-one is richer or poorer as there is no money in the world. Everything is free, and so everyone is happy. Black and white live along side, and no racism is spoken nor any other way indicated. Nor is sexism. Equality and union is this world. There is no global warming because there are no toxic gases being put in the air. Everyone is friends. Everyone has someone to love them.

Surely a world like that can't be that bad? Wouldn't a world like that be a perfect utopia. Or is our lives now the way life is supposed to be led? Who knows? You know, it's your life, so you decide.

Two others like this.
2007-09-02
The commendations this piece recieved in IF1 were: 0 minus votes, 2 plus votes, and 0 astars.
aetherlightning
2007-09-02

utopia-speak amuses me because humans are inherently petty and stupid, but i loved the descriptions... +1

also, CLAIMED!

kluny
2007-09-03
Sounds fucking boring to me. Still, pretty writing.