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Sun, 26 Aug 2007 at 03:00am

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In six moves I'll have checkmate But in one you'll pull the trigger Three days out I knew my fate If I were just a moment quicker Lucky numbers don't change stars Seven Sisters still in the sky And when the car crashes hard How many yards will you fly? Those slow metal clicks stop Keystrokes are fatally final How many minutes on your clock? Before that judgement final?
Four others like this.
2007-08-26
The commendations this piece recieved in IF1 were: 0 minus votes, 3 plus votes, and 1 astars.
bobman12
2007-08-26
Holy hell. That's wonderful. No kidding, it's amazing. +'d and favorited.
themilkman
2007-08-26
This is really great, definitely my favorite of yours. Favorited and A*d.
bobman12
2007-08-26

This is the kinda stuff that slaps me when I read and and say "why the hell didn't I think of this?"

This may be my favorite on here.

artful_dodge
2007-08-27
Jeez, I feel bad. I churned this out in twenty minutes sitting at the keyboard.
burning_sands
2007-10-04
that doesn't mean you should feel bad.. there's this whole thing called inspiration, ya know? :p in fact, i'd feel pretty beast...