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Heat

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Sat, 25 Aug 2007 at 09:23pm

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He wants to fuck me, wants to rub his hands over my collarbones to trickle over my ribs and swirl over my stomach. He wants his lips on my skin and my lips against the stubble on his neck, fingernails clenched into his back, primitively marking him mine.

There’s attraction between us; the kind of heat people across the room can tan in. We converse, touch, laugh, run hands through our hair and sigh loudly whenever we are forced to break eye contact. We talk of life, love, sex and chaos theory, the dance of the planets according to physics, particle accelerators, the decline in ethics in teenagers, black and white photography, classic rock, web comics, haikus, Star Wars, siblings, behavioral quirks, masochism, poetry, pain, fear, the great outdoors, psychology… We touch on every subject over the course of a four hour discussion. There is much in common between us; I have finally found someone both stranger than me in ways I enjoy and intelligent.

But the night ends with my palm print firmly across his face when he drags me into a darkened room and goes for my belt.

He just didn’t understand: it was his mind I wanted to fuck.

Ten others like this.
2007-08-25
The commendations this piece recieved in IF1 were: 0 minus votes, 8 plus votes, and 1 astars.
themilkman
2007-08-26
Interesting. +1
artful_dodge
2007-08-27
Entertaining, but it does make me want to burst into patriarchal rantings on cock teasing.
bobman12
2007-09-08
Mhhm...
neoeno
2007-09-24
Right on. +1
mikeec216
2007-10-03

I love it. How many people don't want to know the mind or the person? They just want to 'know' the body.

sold
2007-10-05
told?
noonewillknow
2007-11-04
Nicee...
purplehaze
2007-12-22
Poor guy
bowers
2008-03-07
fantastic A*
macca
2008-03-28

I think this is just so amazing. I feel I can relate because I find some people so fascinating (without meaning to sound like a psycho) but yeah I think I like this piece a considerable amount :)

+1 fo'sho.