Ours
Tue, 21 Aug 2007 at 02:22pm
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You are a bad movie.
Get away from the screen.
Get yourself moving.
It's not my goal to be mean.
Make your life a tale.
Give yourself an identity.
Not through things that will never prevail.
But through your own goal for serenity.
Get an Oscar for your life of actual events.
And put down the remote.
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2007-08-21
The commendations this piece recieved in IF1 were:
0 minus votes,
3 plus votes, and
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emilyexstacy
2007-08-21
! ! !
I really like this piece.
Wonderfuly expressed.
+uno
inthecafeteria
2007-08-22
Nice one. First time I've seen that message on here, actually. Well played.
plus one
golden_orchids
2007-08-24
I wrote an essay like this for my school newspaper once lol
Nice piece
Good message
+1
burning_sands
2008-01-17
the first three lines don't flow as well of the rest of the poem but i liked it by the end