Oxygen
Mon, 20 Aug 2007 at 04:07pm
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The boy watched the bridge as the cars past quickly by.
The boy was amazed by the lack of feeling, or the try.
The water glistened off the windows and the doors.
The boy couldn't comprehend the unnatural chores
of the makers, the lovers, the bosses and the jokers
who create the demon and unleash it on the ignorant.
The boy couldn't resist going on a rant
to his family, his friends, his woman, his man
about this unforgivable sin given to the land.
His life began deteriorating, began to crush down on the boy
these beliefs are now his mind, when they used to be but, a toy.
It took away all his joy!
He will never experience real life.
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Do you have an O fedish? It seems all your pieces start with O.
I really liked this one.
"The boy was amazed by the lack of feeling or the try"
Is just about my favorite line ever written by anyone, or anything for some reason. +1 and favorited.