Duel
Mon, 20 Aug 2007 at 11:17am
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So which one of us should be hanging?
I for my defiance?
You for your compliance?
Neither appears to listen.
We both make a series of crude jokes.
Now which will grin behind gun smoke?
The time has come, I'm sorry to say,
For one of us to depart.
But which one of us shall stop
The beating of their own heart?
One other likes this.
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2007-08-20
The commendations this piece recieved in IF1 were:
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artful_dodge
2007-08-20
An older one I like better then Disappointing
bobman12
2007-08-20
This one I like.
+1.
sold
2007-10-05
"An older one I like better then Disappointing"
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