Black and White and Ivory
Sun, 5 Aug 2007 at 08:07pm
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We suddenly understand the colours that people
have been trying to explain to us,
It makes our lips feel raw
You choke a bit and my only memory
Of anything,
At this moment,
Is a party of no importance,
battered carpets and Christmas lights
set out of season.
The cat climbs over the piano keys,
Never longing to know
how to play a song,
never longing for the sound of beauty
Or the taste of knowledge.
But who can blame the cat?
Perhaps knowledge makes you hungry
For more knowledge?
It just makes me feel full.
Full,
like the man with four hot dogs
like an over packed suitcase,
brimming with discomfort.
Setting contentment aside for..
Yesterday.
So tonight, I will not touch the piano keys
But I will take your car keys,
because parties like this
make me wonder if the sky has forgotten me
and how could you drive tonight,
if I was watching
the empty sky and not your eyes?
"Baby," I say
"Tell me a story tonight."
You open your mouth,
and all that falls out
are all the colours iv'e forgotten
while we were stuffed up
in that little apartment
The salt on the rim of my glass constricting
my tongue, silently in my mouth
and my hand,
latched up on your shoulder again.
Your story wanders, along with your mind
and takes us both to a
yellow couch,
entirely polyester.
Whispers of sex slip in between the cushions
conversing with lost change
much louder than our whispers were intended to be.
As my breath hits your neck,
your hair is plastered to your forehead
we both taste the moon,
which they tell us is ivory.
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2007-08-05
The commendations this piece recieved in IF1 were:
0 minus votes,
5 plus votes, and
1 astars.
macca
2008-04-13
I really like the way the ideas flow
This is good
bobman12
2007-08-06
Hm. I liked it.
galanteeshowman
2007-08-06
Good, but I no big fan of the "full like the man with four hot dogs" analogy...
cammy
2007-08-07
I agree.. it doesn't fit in too well.
golden_orchids
2007-08-07
aside from that I liked the imagery here XD
