It was you...
Sun, 5 Aug 2007 at 11:28am
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It was you.
It was always you,
had always been you,
would always be you.
But I never knew.
Was too blind to realize,
that everything I'd ever wanted
or had ever held dear
was all kept safely in the guarded
depths
of your eyes.
"My love for you ends when the final rose petal falls."
But is that all?
Do you truly love me no longer?
Will not linger a while,
and bless me once more
with your beautiful smile?
The smile I always took for granted.
Along with the shoulder to cry on,
the embraces to comfort,
and the heart that was freely given me.
Why didn't I see?
How could I not,
when you are so precious to me?
Why is it that I only now realize what I lost,
long after you've gone?
A friend.
A lover.
And so much more...
I've lost them all,
and all what for?
My ignorance?
My pride?
Why couldn't I have only tried?
Tried to understand the looks,
the longing in your eyes?
Tried to understand why,
why you treated me as a prize?
Tried to understand that you protected me,
that you never told me lies?
And the truth of it is...
In this tragic love story of you and I,
I wish that I had been the one to die.
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2007-08-05
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golden_orchids
2007-08-07
Hey, I'm actually getting round to reading your pieces at last!
I really like parts of this, I think they could easily work well as song lyrics XD
good work :)
