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Offline InTheCafeteria

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Brother Scorn
« on: January 10, 2007, 09:57:13 pm »
Yeah, there's a new Brother Scorn up.  Yeah, I know, it's not Augustus Prairie, but I think it was Scorn's turn anyway.

This new one's called Stranger.  I had just come up with the idea literally as soon as I started writing it.  It was originally gonna go into the horrible mutilation of Santa, but it sorta turned in another direction.  It would have had the same effect anyway.

Right now, I like the ending I left.  I could have continued and actually, you know, gone INTO it, as I was planning on doing from the start, but it was already longer than any of the other Brother Scorn entries [which isn't necessarily a bad thing], and I think it would be a little extraneous anyhow.

But tell me what you think.
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Re: Brother Scorn
« Reply #1 on: January 10, 2007, 09:59:17 pm »
I like it.
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Re: Brother Scorn
« Reply #2 on: January 11, 2007, 09:48:03 am »
It's interesting.
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