I know I haven't been the best praise/response reciprocator. I don't expect much of myself. but, I think I've found something that I'm serious about writing. This started out pretty much by chance, and back then my writing was a hundred times more florid and poetic and descriptive than it is now. Right now I'm just trying to find my way back to how I wrote and thought back then.
These recent pieces (the letters) are by and far character development. Tedious and organization-demanding (not my fortes. I write best w/o dialog or stream of thought, but I'm workin' on it), but they're what I'm building the story on (and there is a reason they're 'from nobody', but that's several letters and a nightmare (daymare? SSJ is ridiculous like that) away)
Please take a look and tell me what you think (and rip them apart if you so please).
thanks,
subby.