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Offline Warlord255

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Test, Test, one two. Newbie here.
« on: July 22, 2008, 06:56:54 pm »
Good evening, everyone. I'm new to this little neck of the woods and I've a story to share.

It's part one of a series; the parts are relatively short, both because of my obsessive writing style and my lack of time to devote to it. I've a few more parts done currently, and if anyone here finds it worth the trouble I might post them here.

http://www.indyfluency.com/v.php?p=1815

Enjoy.
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Re: Test, Test, one two. Newbie here.
« Reply #1 on: July 22, 2008, 07:37:21 pm »
WHOA CLAIMED
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and now, for a forty-eight hour music marathon. bwhahahaha
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Re: Test, Test, one two. Newbie here.
« Reply #2 on: July 22, 2008, 07:39:23 pm »
okay now that that's over, you should probably post an introduction in the introductions.

I officially welcome you to IF, we are weird and insane and there are drunk geniuses.

ahh dammit b_s got it. i guess I missed another claim. dammit.

well nvm the claim then.

but welcome anyways! when I have time, I'll read that story of yours, probably tomorrow.
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Quote from: subliminiminal on December 05, 2008, 10:58:38 pm
parents in DC for the weekend!
and now, for a forty-eight hour music marathon. bwhahahaha
fear me, small yappy dog that lives next door. fear me.
LET'S MOTHERFUCKING RO-oh sweet its frankie valli

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Re: Test, Test, one two. Newbie here.
« Reply #3 on: July 22, 2008, 08:41:24 pm »
...Claim?
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Re: Test, Test, one two. Newbie here.
« Reply #4 on: July 22, 2008, 09:25:45 pm »
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English doesn't borrow from other languages. It follows them down dark allies, knocks them over, and goes through their pockets for loose grammar.

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Re: Test, Test, one two. Newbie here.
« Reply #5 on: July 23, 2008, 09:26:17 am »
I still don't understand what "claimed" means.

._. Am I his her bitch now, or something?
« Last Edit: July 23, 2008, 07:12:52 pm by Warlord255 »
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Re: Test, Test, one two. Newbie here.
« Reply #6 on: July 23, 2008, 09:53:53 am »
Quote from: Warlord255 on July 23, 2008, 09:26:17 am
I still don't understand what "claimed" means.

._. Am I her bitch now, or something?

Yes, pretty much. She is now your god, and you are now her slave.
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Re: Test, Test, one two. Newbie here.
« Reply #7 on: July 23, 2008, 10:55:21 am »
thanks for that bobman, i know you've always got my back
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Re: Test, Test, one two. Newbie here.
« Reply #8 on: July 23, 2008, 07:13:21 pm »
Quote from: bobman12 on July 23, 2008, 09:53:53 am
Quote from: Warlord255 on July 23, 2008, 09:26:17 am
I still don't understand what "claimed" means.

._. Am I her bitch now, or something?

Yes, pretty much. She is now your god, and you are now her slave.

Oh.

Well, that doesn't sound all that unpleasant... though I'm not exactly the submissive type.

Nobody's reading my things? :(
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Re: Test, Test, one two. Newbie here.
« Reply #9 on: July 23, 2008, 08:46:19 pm »
Quote from: Warlord255 on July 23, 2008, 07:13:21 pm
Quote from: bobman12 on July 23, 2008, 09:53:53 am
Quote from: Warlord255 on July 23, 2008, 09:26:17 am
I still don't understand what "claimed" means.

._. Am I her bitch now, or something?

Yes, pretty much. She is now your god, and you are now her slave.

Oh.

Well, that doesn't sound all that unpleasant... though I'm not exactly the submissive type.

Nobody's reading my things? :(

You'll break. Post more and people will!
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Re: Test, Test, one two. Newbie here.
« Reply #10 on: July 24, 2008, 04:49:57 am »
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Quote from: subliminiminal on December 05, 2008, 10:58:38 pm
parents in DC for the weekend!
and now, for a forty-eight hour music marathon. bwhahahaha
fear me, small yappy dog that lives next door. fear me.
LET'S MOTHERFUCKING RO-oh sweet its frankie valli

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Re: Test, Test, one two. Newbie here.
« Reply #11 on: July 24, 2008, 04:50:39 am »
Quote from: Warlord255 on July 23, 2008, 07:13:21 pm
Quote from: bobman12 on July 23, 2008, 09:53:53 am
Quote from: Warlord255 on July 23, 2008, 09:26:17 am
I still don't understand what "claimed" means.

._. Am I her bitch now, or something?

Yes, pretty much. She is now your god, and you are now her slave.

Oh.

Well, that doesn't sound all that unpleasant... though I'm not exactly the submissive type.

Nobody's reading my things? :(

i read your piece.
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Quote from: subliminiminal on December 05, 2008, 10:58:38 pm
parents in DC for the weekend!
and now, for a forty-eight hour music marathon. bwhahahaha
fear me, small yappy dog that lives next door. fear me.
LET'S MOTHERFUCKING RO-oh sweet its frankie valli

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Re: Test, Test, one two. Newbie here.
« Reply #12 on: July 24, 2008, 05:42:53 am »
people are more likely to read your piece if you comment and + other people's pieces and also if you break up very large pieces into chapters and create a series
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Re: Test, Test, one two. Newbie here.
« Reply #13 on: July 24, 2008, 10:34:32 am »
Quote from: Warlord255 on July 23, 2008, 07:13:21 pm
Quote from: bobman12 on July 23, 2008, 09:53:53 am
Quote from: Warlord255 on July 23, 2008, 09:26:17 am
I still don't understand what "claimed" means.

._. Am I her bitch now, or something?

Yes, pretty much. She is now your god, and you are now her slave.

Oh.

Well, that doesn't sound all that unpleasant... though I'm not exactly the submissive type.

Nobody's reading my things? :(

give it a few more days
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Re: Test, Test, one two. Newbie here.
« Reply #14 on: July 25, 2008, 11:44:11 pm »
Quote from: Bowers on July 24, 2008, 05:42:53 am
people are more likely to read your piece if you comment and + other people's pieces and also if you break up very large pieces into chapters and create a series

I've got more than one part to it... I'm kind of testing the waters.

Also I'm pretty much dead IRL. No time for to read and say nice things. D:
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