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Offline cyanide

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Oh hey
« on: July 15, 2008, 01:44:25 pm »
I wrote this thing awhile back. Kind of an essay on love almost?

I found it last night and figured I'd post it. Feedback plz?

http://www.indyfluency.com/v.php?p=1802

I have a language and sex warning, in case you're offended by that sort of thing.
(IF? Offended by foul language and sex? What alternate universe am I in?!)
<[cyanide]> What are vintage boys like?
<stealthtamales> I suppose they slay dragons

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Re: Oh hey
« Reply #1 on: July 16, 2008, 02:21:44 pm »
I really like this.

I'm in my first love, its been well, horrible. the last seven months or so.

loving someone can make you both incredibly happy and incredibly miserable at the same time, but I'm doing pretty good and trying to stay positive, when things are kinda well, really negative.

I'm curious, you dont have to answer this if its too personal, but how did things go with the guy you talk about in that piece?
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Re: Oh hey
« Reply #2 on: July 16, 2008, 03:06:23 pm »
Nothing in my love life has ever worked out. The piece is actually a collective of most of the guys in my life.
<[cyanide]> What are vintage boys like?
<stealthtamales> I suppose they slay dragons

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Re: Oh hey
« Reply #3 on: July 16, 2008, 05:53:41 pm »
im sure it will work out, eventually.

all we can ever do is think that everything will work out.
parents in DC for the weekend!
and now, for a forty-eight hour music marathon. bwhahahaha
fear me, small yappy dog that lives next door. fear me.
LET'S MOTHERFUCKING RO-oh sweet its frankie valli